Fix grammar (See #20)

InspireRobotics · Apr 9, 2019 · 183f042 · 183f042
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diff --git a/docs/sponsorship.html b/docs/sponsorship.html
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 </div>
 
 		<div class="page-box">
-			<h1 class="title-caption">Would like to help support INSPIRE Robotics?</h1>
+			<h1 class="title-caption">Would you like to help support INSPIRE Robotics?</h1>
 			<p>
 				INSPIRE Robotics is always looking for sponsors to help continue our goals of educating young engineers.
 				We are always looking for sponsors to help us fund the team. If you are interested in sponsoring our team

diff --git a/docs/tshirt_cannon.html b/docs/tshirt_cannon.html
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ <h1>T-Shirt Cannon</h1>
         <a href="assets/team_pictures/cannonbot/cannonbot.jpg" itemprop="contentUrl" data-size="2048x1365">
             <img class="gallery-img" src="assets/team_pictures/cannonbot/cannonbot.jpg" itemprop="thumbnail" />
         </a>
-        <figcaption class="pswp__caption__center" itemprop="caption description">The t-shirt cannon bot at the GHS football game</figcaption>
+        <figcaption class="pswp__caption__center" itemprop="caption description">The t-shirt cannon at the high school football game</figcaption>
     </figure>
 </div>
 
@@ -156,4 +156,4 @@ <h6>Copyright Eastern Ohio Robotics 2018</h6>
 	</center>
 </body>
 
-</html>
+</html>
diff --git a/src/sponsorship.html b/src/sponsorship.html
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 		{{{header.html}}}
 
 		<div class="page-box">
-			<h1 class="title-caption">Would like to help support INSPIRE Robotics?</h1>
+			<h1 class="title-caption">Would you like to help support INSPIRE Robotics?</h1>
 			<p>
 				INSPIRE Robotics is always looking for sponsors to help continue our goals of educating young engineers.
 				We are always looking for sponsors to help us fund the team. If you are interested in sponsoring our team

diff --git a/src/tshirt_cannon.html b/src/tshirt_cannon.html
@@ -15,11 +15,11 @@ <h1>T-Shirt Cannon</h1>
 
 			<p>The team's’ lead outreach robot is the Cannon Bot, which is a repurposed FRC Robot from 2016’s game, FIRST Stronghold.
 				In Stronghold, the robot was made to effectively go under, through, and over obstacles to score “boulders” into the opposing
-				team’s castle. This robust drivetrain made it a perfect fit to be the team’s new outreach robot. Once the robot’s dual
-				cannon system was made it was mounted to the frame after more supports were added to ensure the cannons would stay in
-				place. With this robot we now bring it to events around Granville and beyond to spread STEM education and the ideals
-				of FIRST while also launching T-shirts! If you want to see the bot up close make sure to catch it at the Granville trick
-				or treat as well as the Candlelight walking tour. But if you want to see the bot in action, come see us at the Granville
+				team’s castle, and it's robust drivetrain made it a perfect fit to be the team’s new outreach robot. Once the robot’s dual
+				cannon system was made, it was mounted to the frame (along with several more supports) to ensure the cannons would stay in
+				place. We now bring the Cannon Bot to events around Granville and beyond to spread STEM education and the ideals
+				of FIRST, all while launching T-shirts! If you want to see the bot up close, make sure to check out our booth during Granville Trick
+				or Treating as well as the Candlelight Walking Tour. But if you want to see the bot in action, come see us at the Granville
 				High School football games!
 			</p>