diff --git a/Sources/iOSAccessibilityHandbook/iOSAccessibilityHandbook.docc/Pages/Integration/AdoptionGuide.tutorial b/Sources/iOSAccessibilityHandbook/iOSAccessibilityHandbook.docc/Pages/Integration/AdoptionGuide.tutorial index 4b4c3a9..5fbed35 100644 --- a/Sources/iOSAccessibilityHandbook/iOSAccessibilityHandbook.docc/Pages/Integration/AdoptionGuide.tutorial +++ b/Sources/iOSAccessibilityHandbook/iOSAccessibilityHandbook.docc/Pages/Integration/AdoptionGuide.tutorial @@ -13,14 +13,14 @@ @Volume(name: "I. Integrating interfaces with accessibility") { - The fundamental understanding of accessibility is set here. This volume will teach you of **key principles** behind digital accessibility in general, and introduce to **common iOS accessibility solutions** in particular. + Learn **key principles** of digital accessibility in general and **common iOS accessibility solutions** in particular. @Image(source: volume-1.png, alt: "") @Chapter(name: "Expose interfacial data") { @Image(source: chapter-1-1.png, alt: "") - First of all, we are going to learn **what components make up an accessible interface**: elemental **properties** and **functionality** that enable a broader scope of users to access such interface. Including users of assistive technology. + Get to know **what components make up an accessible interface**: elemental **properties** and **functionality** that enable a broader scope of users to access such interface. Including users of assistive technology. @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibilityAttributes") @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:MultipleTraits") @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ @Chapter(name: "Simplify layout") { @Image(source: chapter-1-3.png, alt: "") - Accessible representation of an interface is not enough. As the next step, we have to ensure that the **users are able to complete the tasks they are *supposed* to achieve**. We are going to accomplish that by **reviewing the layout** of the interface to **develop accessible user paths**. + Accessible representation of an interface is not enough. Ensure that the **users are able to complete the tasks they are *supposed* to achieve**. **Review the layout** of the interface to **develop accessible user paths**. @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:ComplexCells") @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:VerticalSwipes") @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ @Chapter(name: "Establish meaningful connections") { @Image(source: chapter-1-2.png, alt: "") - To conclude basic accessibility adoption, the user paths consistent of elements have to form an **integral accessible interface**, approachable with **alternative controlling options**. + Create an **integral accessible interface**, approachable with **alternative controlling options**. @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:HorizontalSwipes") @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Notifications") @@ -46,13 +46,13 @@ } @Volume(name: "II. Enhancing accessible experience") { - Once the foundation is set, we can discuss **various accessibility practices in a greater detail**. In this volume we are going to inspect **different aspects of both user interface and experience** that will contribute to our **solid and cohesive comprehension of accessibility**. + Explore **various accessibility practices in a greater detail**. Inspect **different aspects of both user interface and experience** that will contribute to **solid and cohesive comprehension of accessibility**. @Image(source: volume-2.png, alt: "") @Chapter(name: "Accessible content") { @Image(source: chapter-2-1.png, alt: "") - Regardless of the means used to convey certain information, interfacial content has to be provided with **alternative representation**. In this chapter we are going to learn how to **accessibly describe an interface**. + Regardless of the means used to convey certain information, interfacial content has to be provided with **alternative representation**. Learn how to **accessibly describe an interface**. @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleCharts") @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleListening") @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleReading") @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ @Chapter(name: "Accessible controls") { - In analogy with alternative content representation, **alternative accessible controlling options** enable additional ways of **interacting with an interface**. + In analogy with alternative content representation, learn how **alternative accessible controlling options** enable additional ways of **interacting with an interface**. @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AdjustableElements") @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Frame") @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Haptics") @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ @Volume(name: "III. Extend on enterprise processes") { - Concluding the course, the last volume provides **additional insights** on the topic of accessibility and its integration at various stages of **product life cycle**. + Gather **additional insights** on the topic of accessibility and its integration at various stages of **product life cycle**. @Image(source: volume-3.png, alt: "")