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Date: Sat, 1 Feb 2025 16:42:52 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] chore: slight rewording

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 docs/authoring/lipsum.qmd | 4 +++-
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/docs/authoring/lipsum.qmd b/docs/authoring/lipsum.qmd
index 13968c520..24f8435a2 100644
--- a/docs/authoring/lipsum.qmd
+++ b/docs/authoring/lipsum.qmd
@@ -31,7 +31,9 @@ Here's an example of `lipsum` generating two paragraphs of text, by adding `{{{<
 - `{{{< lipsum nparas >}}}`: `nparas` describes the number of paragraphs of placeholder text to include in the document. 
 - `{{{< lipsum start-end >}}}`: `start` and `end` are two numbers that describe the range of lorem ipsum paragraphs to include in the document.
 
-`lipsum` generates the placeholder text in a deterministic way[^1], so the same parameters will always generate the same text, but using `random=true` will generate a paragraph or random set of paragraphs.
+`lipsum` produces placeholder text in a predictable manner[^1]. This means that the same parameters will always yield identical text.
+However, you can choose to set `random=true` to generate a paragraph or a random collection of paragraphs.
+
 
 - `{{{< lipsum 1 random=true >}}}`: This will generate a single paragraph of random lorem ipsum text.