better curriculum wording + ideation

Sources/iOSAccessibilityHandbook/iOSAccessibilityHandbook.docc/Pages/Integration/AdoptionGuide.tutorial

@@ -1,26 +1,26 @@
 @Tutorials(name: "iOS Accessibility") {
     @Intro(title: "iOS Accessibility Guide") {
-        This collection of guides may be perceived as a **complete course on accessibility of iOS apps**: from the very **basics** to **advanced** system design solution. 
+        This collection of guides is a **complete course on accessibility of iOS apps**: from the fundamental concepts of accessible design to some really advanced accessibility accommodation solutions. 
 
         ### Course structure
-        The course consists of three *volumes*: **Basic**, **Advanced** and **Enterprise**. Each volume consists of multiple *chapters* introducing related **accessibility practices**.
+        The course consists of three *volumes*: **Foundations**, **Advancements** and **Enterprise**. Each volume contains multiple *chapters* teaching related **accessibility practices**.
 
         ### Contents description
-        Every page sufficiently covers the **reasoning** behind the given topic. **Real-life examples**, **additional resources** and **sample code** for both UIKit and SwiftUI will enable you to  **practise accessibility** right away and successfully.
+        Every page sufficiently covers both theoretical and practical aspects of the given topic. **Real-life examples**, **usage recordings**, **additional reading** and **sample code** for both UIKit and SwiftUI will enable you to start working on accessibility **right away** and **successfully**.
 
         @Image(source: contents, alt: "")
     }
 
-    @Volume(name: "I. Integrating interfaces with accessibility") {
+    @Volume(name: "I. Constructing accessible interfaces") {
 
-        Learn **key principles** of digital accessibility in general and **common iOS accessibility solutions** in particular.
+        Learn how to apply digital accessibility **key principles** to development of iOS applications in three simple steps.
 
         @Image(source: volume-1.png, alt: "")
 
         @Chapter(name: "Expose interfacial data") {
             @Image(source: chapter-1-1.png, alt: "")
 
-            Get to know **what components make up an accessible interface**: elemental **properties** and **functionality** that enable a broader scope of users to access such interface. Including users of assistive technology.
+            Interfaces are built from interfacial elements. Get to know **what components make up an accessible interface**: what are their elemental **properties** and **functionality**.
 
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibilityAttributes")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:MultipleTraits")
@@ -29,30 +29,32 @@
         @Chapter(name: "Simplify layout") {
             @Image(source: chapter-1-3.png, alt: "")
 
-            Accessible representation of an interface is not enough. Ensure that the **users are able to complete the tasks they are *supposed* to achieve**. **Review the layout** of the interface to **develop accessible user paths**.
+            Accessibility is inseparably dependant on other parts of **user experience**, such as usability. Ensure that your users are not having a hard time **understanding** and **navigating** the interface.
 
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:ComplexCells")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:VerticalSwipes")
         }
 
-        @Chapter(name: "Establish meaningful connections") {
+        @Chapter(name: "Establish various means to interact") {
             @Image(source: chapter-1-2.png, alt: "")
 
-            Create an **integral accessible interface**, approachable with **alternative controlling options**.
+            An interface built of accessible components laid out in an accessible manner won't do any good if a diverse user can't operate it with **alternative controlling options**.
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:HorizontalSwipes")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Notifications")
 
         }
     }
 
-    @Volume(name: "II. Enhancing accessible experience") {
-        Explore **various accessibility practices in a greater detail**. Inspect **different aspects of both user interface and experience** that will contribute to **solid and cohesive comprehension of accessibility**.
+    @Volume(name: "II. Adopting accessible solutions") {
+
+        Regardless of how thoughtfully an interface was constructed, it is virtually **impossible to consider everyone**. Allow users to **configure** their user experience to not leave anyone behind.
+
         @Image(source: volume-2.png, alt: "")
 
         @Chapter(name: "Accessible content") {
             @Image(source: chapter-2-1.png, alt: "")
 
-            Regardless of the means used to convey certain information, interfacial content has to be provided with **alternative representation**. Learn how to **accessibly describe an interface**.
+            Means of communication available for iOS applications are determined by capabilities of the device. Don't rely on particular media -- whether it's **visual**, **audial** or **tactile** -- use the most of technology by providing **alternative representation** options.
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleCharts")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleListening")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleReading")
@@ -61,7 +63,7 @@
 
         @Chapter(name: "Accessible controls") {
 
-            In analogy with alternative content representation, learn how **alternative accessible controlling options** enable additional ways of **interacting with an interface**.
+            In analogy with alternative content representation, learn how enabling **alternative controlling options** lets more people use the application.
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AdjustableElements")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Frame")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Haptics")
@@ -73,7 +75,7 @@
         @Chapter(name: "Accessible navigation") {
             @Image(source: chapter-2-3.png, alt: "")
 
-            The purpose of any user interface is to let its user **complete required tasks**. In the meanwhile, good user experience design makes this process *easy* and *enjoyable*. **Make the accessible experience equitably delightful**.
+            The purpose of any user interface is to let its user complete required tasks. In the meanwhile, *good* user experience design makes this process **easy** and **enjoyable**. **Make the accessible experience equitably delightful**.
 
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:ControlHierarchy")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:CustomActions")
@@ -84,7 +86,6 @@
 
         @Chapter(name: "Visual accessibility") {
             @Image(source: chapter-2-4.png, alt: "")
-
             Sighted people see things differently. Visual accessibility ensures that an interface is **visually perceivable for everyone** regardless of conditions that may affect their vision.
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:ColoursAndShapes")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:InterfaceScale")
@@ -94,14 +95,15 @@
 
     @Volume(name: "III. Extend on enterprise processes") {
 
-        Gather **additional insights** on the topic of accessibility and its integration at various stages of **product life cycle**.
+        Build up a wider picture on the topic of accessibility and its integration at various stages of **product life cycle**.
 
         @Image(source: volume-3.png, alt: "")
 
         @Chapter(name: "Design") {
             @Image(source: chapter-3-1.png, alt: "")
 
-            Learn more about **inclusive design** and **reasoning** behind accessibility.
+            Accessibility is a *property* of products that is resulted from various **design decision**. Learn what solutions lead to increases in accessibility.
+
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Standards")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleDesign")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:VoiceOverDesigner")
@@ -123,7 +125,8 @@
         @Chapter(name: "Activism") {
             @Image(source: chapter-3-3.png, alt: "")
 
-            Participate in the life of **a11y community** and **advocate for accessibility** as an iOS developer.
+
+            Explore what you can do to **contribute** to accessibility as to a professional field.
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibilityActivism")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Statistics")
 

Sources/iOSAccessibilityHandbook/iOSAccessibilityHandbook.docc/Pages/iOSAccessibilityHandbook.md

@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ Make your iOS applications **accessible**
 
 ## Welcome to iOS Accessibility Handbook
 
-[**iOS Accessibility Handbook**](<doc:iOSAccessibilityHandbook>) is an open-source **educational project** about making iOS applications **accessible**. 
+[**iOS Accessibility Handbook**](<doc:iOSAccessibilityHandbook>) is an open-source **educational project** dedicated to iOS applications **accessibility**. 
 
-**Accessible applications** work with various [**assistive technologies**](<doc:AccessibilityFeatures>), such as [**VoiceOver**](<doc:VoiceOver>), [**Voice Control**](<doc:VoiceControl>) and [**Switch Control**](<doc:SwitchControl>), which enable **people with disabilities** to use the applications. 
+**An accessible application** works with various [**assistive technologies**](<doc:AccessibilityFeatures>), such as [**VoiceOver**](<doc:VoiceOver>), [**Voice Control**](<doc:VoiceControl>) and [**Switch Control**](<doc:SwitchControl>), which enable more people -- for example, **people with disabilities** -- to use this application. 
 @Image(source: features-1, alt: "")
 @Image(source: features-2, alt: "")
 
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ The project is dedicated to help *developers*, *designers*, *testers*, *research
 **iOS Accessibility Handbook** is essentially a **complete course** of [**digital accessibility**](<doc:a11yTerminology>) best practices from the *perspective* of iOS development.
 @Image(source: book-content, alt: "")
 
-To inspect the *curriculum* in greater detail visit the [**Table of Contents**](<doc:AdoptionGuide>) page.
+To inspect the **curriculum** in greater detail visit the [**Table of Contents**](<doc:AdoptionGuide>) page.
 
 ### Technical implementation
 At the moment the project is a **[DocC](https://www.swift.org/documentation/docc) (documentation catalog)** hosted by [**GitHub pages**](https://pages.github.com).