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@@ -13,14 +13,14 @@
 
     @Volume(name: "I. Integrating interfaces with accessibility") {
 
-        The fundamental understanding of accessibility is set here. This volume will teach you of **key principles** behind digital accessibility in general, and introduce to **common iOS accessibility solutions** in particular.
+        Learn **key principles** of digital accessibility in general and **common iOS accessibility solutions** in particular.
 
         @Image(source: volume-1.png, alt: "")
 
         @Chapter(name: "Expose interfacial data") {
             @Image(source: chapter-1-1.png, alt: "")
 
-            First of all, we are going to learn **what components make up an accessible interface**: elemental **properties** and **functionality** that enable a broader scope of users to access such interface. Including users of assistive technology.
+            Get to know **what components make up an accessible interface**: elemental **properties** and **functionality** that enable a broader scope of users to access such interface. Including users of assistive technology.
 
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibilityAttributes")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:MultipleTraits")
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
         @Chapter(name: "Simplify layout") {
             @Image(source: chapter-1-3.png, alt: "")
 
-            Accessible representation of an interface is not enough. As the next step, we have to ensure that the **users are able to complete the tasks they are *supposed* to achieve**. We are going to accomplish that by **reviewing the layout** of the interface to **develop accessible user paths**.
+            Accessible representation of an interface is not enough. Ensure that the **users are able to complete the tasks they are *supposed* to achieve**. **Review the layout** of the interface to **develop accessible user paths**.
 
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:ComplexCells")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:VerticalSwipes")
@@ -38,21 +38,21 @@
         @Chapter(name: "Establish meaningful connections") {
             @Image(source: chapter-1-2.png, alt: "")
 
-            To conclude basic accessibility adoption, the user paths consistent of elements have to form an **integral accessible interface**, approachable with **alternative controlling options**.
+            Create an **integral accessible interface**, approachable with **alternative controlling options**.
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:HorizontalSwipes")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Notifications")
 
         }
     }
 
     @Volume(name: "II. Enhancing accessible experience") {
-        Once the foundation is set, we can discuss **various accessibility practices in a greater detail**. In this volume we are going to inspect **different aspects of both user interface and experience** that will contribute to our **solid and cohesive comprehension of accessibility**.
+        Explore **various accessibility practices in a greater detail**. Inspect **different aspects of both user interface and experience** that will contribute to **solid and cohesive comprehension of accessibility**.
         @Image(source: volume-2.png, alt: "")
 
         @Chapter(name: "Accessible content") {
             @Image(source: chapter-2-1.png, alt: "")
 
-            Regardless of the means used to convey certain information, interfacial content has to be provided with **alternative representation**. In this chapter we are going to learn how to **accessibly describe an interface**.
+            Regardless of the means used to convey certain information, interfacial content has to be provided with **alternative representation**. Learn how to **accessibly describe an interface**.
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleCharts")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleListening")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AccessibleReading")
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 
         @Chapter(name: "Accessible controls") {
 
-            In analogy with alternative content representation, **alternative accessible controlling options** enable additional ways of **interacting with an interface**.
+            In analogy with alternative content representation, learn how **alternative accessible controlling options** enable additional ways of **interacting with an interface**.
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:AdjustableElements")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Frame")
             @TutorialReference(tutorial: "doc:Haptics")
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
 
     @Volume(name: "III. Extend on enterprise processes") {
 
-        Concluding the course, the last volume provides **additional insights** on the topic of accessibility and its integration at various stages of **product life cycle**.
+        Gather **additional insights** on the topic of accessibility and its integration at various stages of **product life cycle**.
 
         @Image(source: volume-3.png, alt: "")