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 <li>Drab House</li>
 
+<li>Draft of 'Douglas Presser 1 - One Paragraph'</li>
+
 <li>Edwina Rook</li>
 
 <li>Egyptian Soul</li>
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-<div created="20230329012254242" modified="20250209005055020" tags="character karcer minor [[uc karcer]] syndicate" title="Douglas Presser">
-<pre>[[Douglas Presser 1 - One Paragraph]]
+<div created="20230329012254242" modified="20250209040255858" tags="character karcer [[uc karcer]] syndicate trivial" title="Douglas Presser">
+<pre>
 
 ; High Concept
 : Smart, but poor Ogre
 
-; Fetch
-: 
 
 ; Demographics
 : Male Ogre in his mid 20's, no faith, african-american
 
 ; Fortisms
 : ??
 
+; Motivation (Abstract Want)
+: Escape the poverty and lower class life he was born into.
+
+; Goal (Concrete Want)
+: Make tuition money for this semester.
+
 ; Backstory ¶
 :Douglas is a  second generation Ogre, who grew up in poor and dangerous neighborhoods of Karcer.   He clawed his way to a scholarship at [[UC Karcer]] through will and academic aptitude.  Even with that he still needs to fight to make enough money to pay his expenses until he can graduate.  
 
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 As a large [[Ogre|Races]] is intelligence is often underestimated by those who just see his brawn.  
 
-Always intrigued by interesting problems and quandaries to think through.  </pre>
+Always intrigued by interesting problems and quandaries to think through.  
+
+Doug's storyline is pretty simple.  In order to make tuition this semester he has fight and win and the underground fight. </pre>
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 <pre>!![[Douglas Presser]]
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 This house actually exists, it's a few doors down from my Grandparents' house. The elderly owner died earlier this year; never married, he'd been living alone ever since his twin brother died. </pre>
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+<pre>!![[Douglas Presser]]
+
+;Name
+: Douglas Presser
+
+; Storyline
+: Fight for tuition money, then later help [[H. Des]] track down a killer.
+
+; Motivation (Abstract Want)
+: Escape the poverty and lower class life he was born into.
+
+; Goal (Concrete Want)
+: Take tuition money for this semester.
+
+; Conflict
+: Means he has to fight and take &quot;food off the table of those he respects.&quot;
+
+; Epiphany
+: No real Epiphany
+
+; Storyline ¶
+: Doug's storyline is pretty simple.  In order to make tuition this semester he has fight and win and the underground fight.  He faces off against H. Des and it comes down to a split decision.  After the fight he checks in on Des to make sure he's okay.
+
+: Sometime later Des comes to him on campus to ask for help tracking a killer.  Doug is able to cobble together an esotera to help, but it is imprecise at best.  
+
+: That's the end of Doug's involvement in the mess. 
+</pre>
+</div>
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 <pre>! The Kid